Friday, July 25, 2014

My holidays at tenpin bowling

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WALT: write a recount about my school holiday using effective paragraphs.
Topic: School Holidays.
Audience: Parkvale, whanau, worldwide blog audience.
Purpose: To tell people about your holiday experiences.
Text type: Recount
Key Vocabulary and Sentence Beginnings:
delightful, joyful, overwhelmed, over the moon, fantastic, superb, on cloud nine

Have you ever been to...
Wow! What an exciting …
Guess what? …
During the school holidays …
Last week...
Helpful Links: Brainstorm  You can copy this or use another app
Apps: Mind Meister, simple mind (Ipad)
Structure:

Title

P1: Introduction: Who? When? Where? Why? my family went to tenpin bowling because we wanted to have fun as a family.

P2: What happened? Why/How? I came last on the first round and my mum and Riki won.

P3: What happened next? Why/How? the second round it was almost a tie for me and my brother but he did not get that much points to beat me and won the second round.

P4: Conclusion: What happened in the end?
How did you feel about the experience? What did you enjoy the most? What do you hope for next time?
Once you have finished make sure to mark with a buddy or yourself using our PARAGRAPH RUBRIC. Draw an image that represents your writing in sumo paint or ABC paint.
Begin:

Tenpin bowling with my family


“ Finally mum I get to go to tenpin bowling ’’ because I haven't been to tenpin bowling for a long time “now mum can I go first please ” . when my family and I went in the tenpin bowling building my family got bowling shoes exempt for lukei because hes only one and we get tamati the bowl holder because he cannot hold bowling balls hes only 3 . When I started the first game I got 6 pins and my brother got a strike on his his first bowl and because my brother is a good bowler then my mum had a turn and she got 4 pins then tamati had a turn and got 3 pins .

last week on Monday me and my family went to tenpin bowling. My brother tamati and my dad were taking turns at bowling and I went first my brother went second my mum went 3 and my dad and brother tamati went 4 and my baby brother Luke was watching us bowl and me and my brother Riki went to the games at the back and played with Luke and tamati . While me Riki my brother are waiting our turns my mum and dad were having their turns . After the first round my family and I had tea at tenpin bowling and I didn't have anything because I was not hungry . Later on my family and I had a another game of tenpin strike . I went and got 5 pins when I started the because My brother Riki helped me with my aim because I can’t bowl the bowling ball properly and I came 1st  In the last game my mum and brother came second and my dad came last .

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