Friday, July 25, 2014

My holidays at tenpin bowling

My Holiday Highlight
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WALT: write a recount about my school holiday using effective paragraphs.
Topic: School Holidays.
Audience: Parkvale, whanau, worldwide blog audience.
Purpose: To tell people about your holiday experiences.
Text type: Recount
Key Vocabulary and Sentence Beginnings:
delightful, joyful, overwhelmed, over the moon, fantastic, superb, on cloud nine

Have you ever been to...
Wow! What an exciting …
Guess what? …
During the school holidays …
Last week...
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Apps: Mind Meister, simple mind (Ipad)


P1: Introduction: Who? When? Where? Why? my family went to tenpin bowling because we wanted to have fun as a family.

P2: What happened? Why/How? I came last on the first round and my mum and Riki won.

P3: What happened next? Why/How? the second round it was almost a tie for me and my brother but he did not get that much points to beat me and won the second round.

P4: Conclusion: What happened in the end?
How did you feel about the experience? What did you enjoy the most? What do you hope for next time?
Once you have finished make sure to mark with a buddy or yourself using our PARAGRAPH RUBRIC. Draw an image that represents your writing in sumo paint or ABC paint.

Tenpin bowling with my family

“ Finally mum I get to go to tenpin bowling ’’ because I haven't been to tenpin bowling for a long time “now mum can I go first please ” . when my family and I went in the tenpin bowling building my family got bowling shoes exempt for lukei because hes only one and we get tamati the bowl holder because he cannot hold bowling balls hes only 3 . When I started the first game I got 6 pins and my brother got a strike on his his first bowl and because my brother is a good bowler then my mum had a turn and she got 4 pins then tamati had a turn and got 3 pins .

last week on Monday me and my family went to tenpin bowling. My brother tamati and my dad were taking turns at bowling and I went first my brother went second my mum went 3 and my dad and brother tamati went 4 and my baby brother Luke was watching us bowl and me and my brother Riki went to the games at the back and played with Luke and tamati . While me Riki my brother are waiting our turns my mum and dad were having their turns . After the first round my family and I had tea at tenpin bowling and I didn't have anything because I was not hungry . Later on my family and I had a another game of tenpin strike . I went and got 5 pins when I started the because My brother Riki helped me with my aim because I can’t bowl the bowling ball properly and I came 1st  In the last game my mum and brother came second and my dad came last .

Friday, June 13, 2014

The last story of the Herrick Secrets

The last story of the
Herrick secret

I chose this title because it’s about  the last Herrick secret and it’s the last story of The Herrick book. This title is similar to the last Herrick secret  and that’s why I chose this title because  I like the title that made up about the last Herrick and I like the title that’s called the last Herrick secret and these 2 title have Herrick in it. my story probably looks like a kids story but it gets mysterious for adults and kids like year 4,5,6,7,8,9, will be allowed to read  this mysterious book. why is Isaiah the special one ?

The picture might look like pretty colours But at the end and in the middle the Herrick family  secrets and Becs the girl and Isaiah the boy are the main characters. but it sounds like they stay in the the bush but they also go to the city and Same with Isaiah because Isaiah wanted to go to the city with Becs, Becs mum, mark the step father of becs and nick is the sister and Isaiah, becs and nick they all go to school together and Isaiah made friends with people at school today. The colours don’t matter because In the real world it’s beautiful with colours and it has a sky, grass, buildings and water.

Tuesday, April 15, 2014

richie Mcaw

my report about Richie McCaw
Richie Mccaw is one of the best all blacks players and has been a leader for mostly the whole time.                                                                             
This is Richie and he was born Oamaru in New Zealand. Richie McCaw was born in Oamaru in December 31, 1980 in New Zealand. Richie McCaw was in south island then went to the north island.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         

Richie McCaw or “Richie” is the name thats what everyone calls Richie. Richie is a team player and team leader and Richie is the one thats holding the gold trophy. Richie is a best flanker in the Crusaders and the New Zealand All Blacks.

Richie McCaw team players are ma’a Nonu, Israel dagg, sonny bill williams, Dan carter and Kieran Read. Richie has his great great great great great grandmother hughina, great grandfather seth. Richie McCaw is a fantastic player, helpful person.

Tuesday, March 18, 2014

the kindness boomerang

At Willow Park Rd I played with my brother Tamati and we played with his toys and I gave back his toys when he lost elmo the red monster. At Cornwall park I pushed Tamati on the baby  swing and I got him out of the swing when he was crying. When I was at Havelock North, Middle Rd’ when I finished putting away my stuff, I helped Riki my brother get his lego, pillows, toys, teddies, clothes and blankets in our house in our room.                                          

When Riki, Tamati, Mum and I traveled to New Plymouth I needed help getting my pack of clothes  in the room that I was sleeping in but my mum came and give me a hand. Then my brother, uncles Ant and Gary helped me get my pillows and clothes in.  At my grandpa's and grandma’s house
my grandad and grandma helped me find the remote for me to watch cartoon network on sky.

A moment in time

I heard my cousin yelling.

I heard my brother calling,  “Kevin,  Kevin!”

I saw my brother jumping as high as he could.

I saw that it was to high to jump on the tramp .

I felt I will have to go to the go inside.

I felt like I was going to hurt myself when I bounced on the tramp .

I wondered I could keep on doing it.

I wondered if I should do it again or not.